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And here I wait for thou to come, milady,
But nowhere in sight art thou.
Hath I a heart of fortitude and valiancy,
Dreaming of thou would not be so.

Alas, wage war I ought to do,
For thee to give me thou love.
Albeit fear for battle I feel no more,
I fear, instead, of thou.

Ain’t no man afraid of love,” they say,
But cretins, I call them, they know no love.
To perish at a glance, to yearn for a touch,
There’s no greater dread than such.

Afraid of love?” says a man.
Why should you fear for such?
But no, I say, I do not fear love.
No, old man, I dread to not be loved.
©2006-2009 ~Greki
:icongreki:

Author's Comments

It's been a while since I've uploaded something, huh? Sorry for that, been quite busy. And for all those people that I haven't checked their deviations, I'm truly sorry. ^^;;

BTW, this was inspired by the image of a knight, which said, "The greates loyalty of all is love."

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:iconxathrax123:
Really enjoyed reading this. "To perish at a glance, to yearn for a touch, There’s no greater dread than such." was the part I liked the most. Gave me a funny feeling inside. Hope to read more similar stuff in the future.

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I still remember every hour
Every second has been hours
Far away from many burden
We met eyes without a curtain
:icongerardbm:
Wooow!! it's really ... real and very beautiful.
:iconfortea:
A good one ^^

I like this in particular:
"But no, I say, I do not fear love.
No, old man, I dread to not be loved."

Who doesn't?

Keep writing you are very good ^_~

Plz... share some of your work in spanish ^^

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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
:icongreki:
Sorry for not replying... two years ago... hmm... I think I need to check this account more often. Thanks a bunch for your comment!

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
:icongreki:
Thanks! Sorry for the reaaaaally late reply!

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
:icongreki:
Hace mucho que no escribo en español... creo que solo tengo unos que hice en la secundaria a mi mama. A ver si los subo.

Este poema es una de mis piezas favoritas. Estoy muy orgullosa. xD

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
:iconfortea:
Tienes mucha razon en sentirte orgullosa de tu arte. Bien por ti ^^

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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
:icongreki:
Siiiiii...

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD

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