On doing and undoing,
Not yet doing anything
Ill try on dawn, I say.
Dawn next comes, and I hold it up for the day
So then I go, Ill try on next day.
But then next day comes,
So Ill try some other day.
Some other day wont come,
So I say, Ill have it done today,
Today I see come and not yet it is done.
The kitchens unclean; the desk is all clotted,
The clothes are chaotic; the room is incompetent,
The books are unread; the homeworks unknotted,
There are such things, and I cant seem to have done it!
Worthless!
Not perfect!
No talent!
Too lazy!
Excuses!
No will!
No strength!
No mind!
Not ever time!
Cant be done this, nor any other way!















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Chutkat
"The Legend of the Possesed hand"
Chutkat's soul for sale
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I always thought there were no stupid questions...
Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
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Chutkat
"The Legend of the Possesed hand"
Chutkat's soul for sale
Well, you still suck.
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I always thought there were no stupid questions...
Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
Para este momento estaras preguntando ¿Y este tipo de donde salio? Bueno pues eres la primera escritora que me animo a leer, aparte que de una u otra manera tu hermana me lo presumio y quise probar... Estuvo excelente.
Espero que los comentarios pasados te sirvan para animarte a seguir escribiendo. Tienes un buen don y merece ser explotado aun más.
Muchas gracias por compartir tus pensamientos y sentimientos.
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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
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I always thought there were no stupid questions...
Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
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I always thought there were no stupid questions...
Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
De nada te lo mereces ^^
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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
Lastima que te falte inspiracion, es lo comun en nosotros los escritores.
No digas eso, no me digas que anda decayendo!!! ToT!! *llorando amargamente*
Si vas a escribir que sea por gusto. No porque un par de fans te esten fregando para que lo hagas ^_~.
Hey que tal una reseña de tu parte en mi pagina. Podrias Compartir puntos de vista.
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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
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