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One day I saw
Your pretty smile and thought,
“Couldn’t been bewitched by
Something more beautiful.”
And I’ve prayed to try
That I’d felt I’d fly,
For I’ve fallen now into a deep trap.

But I held on firm;
I saw my dream.
It had a chance to become
Something more genuine.
And I knew I’d win,
If I went on stiff.
But shouldn’t let myself too caught up in this.

Don’t leave me alone now.
I’d not live. I’d not live.
I wish you’d stay in here,
And fancy me in your dreams.
But I cannot hold back my thoughts,
I can-not escape.
But I can’t seem to drown my hopes,
I can-not be away.

Yet I feel sorry now,
For all of those who’d want
Your cherry eyes and hold them
As if they were their own.
But they have got to realize,
They have got to resign
To the idea that now you’re all mine.

Don’t leave me alone now.
I’d not live. I’d not live.
I wish you’d stay in here,
And fancy me in your dreams.
But I cannot hold back my thoughts,
I can-not escape.
But I can’t seem to drown my hopes,
I can-not be away.
©2006-2009 ~Greki
:icongreki:

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Well, it's certainly been a long time since I last updated. Been busy, but oh well. This is a request from my sis, I really hope she likes it.
BTW, don't you think my style changed?

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:iconfortea:
Woooo!!! o.O??

Que saltazo de tiempo.

Hmmmmm pues si el estilo cambio un poquito, lo interpreto menos "oscuro".
Es un poco diferente, más no decayo en calidad si eso es lo que te preocupaba.

Esta muy bonito , tiene mucho entusiasmo más de lo acostumbrado en los anteriores. Supongo que ayudo la experiencia que tomaste de los meses que dividieron las obras pasadas con esta.

Muy padre... Thumbs up!!!

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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
:icongreki:
Jajaja, menos "oscuro"? Buen eufenismo. xD

Ya ni me acordaba de este, y si... un poco de tiempo, eh?

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
:iconfortea:
Eufenismo?? Woorale una palabra nueva para mi.

Naahhh nomas tantito, quien lo nota ??

XD

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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
:icongreki:
Oh si... xD Quien?

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
:iconfortea:
Yo no se, hey yo hize la pregunta!!! ¬¬ **

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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
:icongreki:
Lolz... creo que no habia hablado tanto con alguien en mucho tiempo. xD

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD
:iconfortea:
Lol!!!!
Supongo que eso es bueno ... no ? O.o?

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Es un derecho natural el alimentar nuestra alma con esperanza
:icongreki:
Siii... aunque... esta un poco confuso.

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I always thought there were no stupid questions...

Doesn't mean, though, they don't give me headaches... XD

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